ACADEMIC WRITING SAMPLE ANSWERS

Academic Writing Sample Answers Practice 9 Test 02

This original practice page includes Task 1 (Dynamic Multiple-Line Graph) and Task 2 (Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion), with Band 9, Band 8, and Band 7 sample answers for IELTS preparation.
Academic Writing Task 1

Task 1 · Dynamic Multiple-Line Graph

Task 1 Prompt

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the projected changes in the percentage of the workforce employed in three broad sectors—agriculture, industry, and services—in a rapidly developing country from 2025 to 2040, based on two different economic growth scenarios.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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BAND 9

Part 1 · Band 9 Sample Answer

The line chart forecasts the proportions of workers employed in agriculture, industry and services in a developing country at five-year intervals from 2025 to 2040. Figures are presented for high-growth and balanced-growth scenarios.

Overall, both projections indicate a decisive shift away from agriculture towards the other sectors. This restructuring is considerably stronger under high growth, where industry is expected to become the largest employer by 2040. Under balanced growth, by contrast, services retain and extend their leading position.

In the high-growth scenario, agriculture and services each initially account for 35% of employment, compared with 30% for industry. The agricultural share then falls steeply to 28% in 2030 and 20% in 2035, before reaching only 14% in 2040. Industry follows the opposite pattern, rising successively to 34%, 39% and 44%. Services grow more moderately, from 35% to 38% and then 41%, after which their share edges up to 42%. Industry therefore overtakes services during the final five-year period.

The balanced-growth projection shows a less dramatic decline in agriculture, from 35% in 2025 to 31% in 2030, 25% in 2035 and 20% by 2040. Industrial employment increases gradually from 30% to 35% across the period. Services, meanwhile, rise steadily from 35% to 37%, 41% and finally 45%, leaving this sector ten percentage points ahead of industry. By 2040, compared with balanced growth, high growth produces a nine-point larger industrial share and a six-point smaller agricultural one, while its service figure is three points lower.

BAND 8

Part 1 · Band 8 Sample Answer

The chart illustrates how the employment shares of agriculture, industry and services are predicted to change in a rapidly developing nation between 2025 and 2040 under high-growth and balanced-growth conditions.

Overall, agriculture is projected to lose workers proportionally in both scenarios, while industry and services gain them. The high-growth model produces a much faster movement from agriculture into industry. In the balanced-growth case, services instead show the largest increase and remain the leading sector in 2040.

Agriculture begins at 35% of the workforce in both projections. With high growth, its share is expected to drop to 28% in 2030 and 20% in 2035, before ending at 14%. The corresponding decline under balanced growth is slower, with figures of 31%, 25% and 20%. Consequently, the difference between the two agricultural projections widens to six percentage points by the final year.

Industry accounts for 30% initially. Its share rises substantially under high growth, reaching 34% in 2030, 39% in 2035 and 44% in 2040. Balanced growth results in a gentler increase, to 32%, 34% and 35% respectively. Services also start at 35%. In the high-growth forecast, this proportion climbs to 38% and then 41%, but grows by only one further point in the last five years. Under balanced growth, it increases from 37% in 2030 to 41% in 2035 and 45% in 2040. Thus, industry narrowly leads services under high growth at the end, whereas services exceed industry by ten points in the balanced scenario.

BAND 7

Part 1 · Band 7 Sample Answer

The line chart compares the predicted percentages of the workforce employed in agriculture, industry and services from 2025 to 2040 under two economic growth scenarios.

Overall, the proportion working in agriculture is expected to decrease in both cases, while the figures for industry and services rise. These changes are stronger under high growth, especially for agriculture and industry. By 2040, industry is the largest sector in the high-growth scenario, whereas services rank first under balanced growth.

In 2025, agriculture and services both employ 35% of workers, while the remaining 30% work in industry. Under high growth, agriculture falls to 28% in 2030 and then to 20% in 2035. It reaches its lowest level of 14% in 2040. In comparison, industrial employment grows from 30% to 34%, 39% and finally 44%. The service sector also rises, although more slowly, reaching 38% in 2030, 41% in 2035 and 42% in the final year.

Under balanced growth, agriculture declines less quickly. Its share drops from 35% to 31% in 2030, followed by 25% in 2035 and 20% in 2040. Industry experiences a steady but small increase, moving from 30% to 32%, 34% and 35%. Services grow from 35% initially to 37% in 2030 and 41% five years later, before finishing at 45%. Therefore, in 2040 the balanced-growth service share is three percentage points higher than under high growth, while its industrial figure is nine points lower.

Academic Writing Task 2

Task 2 · Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion

Task 2 Prompt

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.

Write about the following topic:

The concept of ‘universal basic income’ (UBI)—a regular, unconditional cash payment to all citizens—is gaining traction as a potential response to automation-induced job displacement and economic insecurity. Proponents argue it would provide a foundation for human dignity, encourage entrepreneurship, and simplify welfare systems. Opponents contend it is unaffordable, would discourage work, and could lead to inflation or reduced support for those most in need.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

BAND 9

Part 2 · Band 9 Sample Answer

Automation may make employment less stable, while existing welfare systems often leave gaps. Supporters see UBI as a source of security and freedom, whereas critics question its cost and economic effects. In my view, a modest UBI could be valuable, but only as a basic floor combined with progressive taxation and targeted support rather than a replacement for public welfare.

The strongest argument for UBI is that it separates access to necessities from continuous paid employment. This matters when technology eliminates occupations faster than workers can retrain. A predictable income would give displaced employees time to learn new skills instead of accepting the first insecure job available. Because the payment would not be withdrawn when someone starts earning, it could also avoid benefit reductions that make additional work financially unrewarding. The same security might enable people to establish small businesses or perform valuable unpaid care. Moreover, a universal payment requires fewer eligibility assessments, reducing bureaucracy and the stigma associated with means-tested assistance.

Opponents nevertheless raise serious objections. A payment large enough to cover living costs for every adult would require substantial taxation or cuts to services. Universality also appears wasteful because affluent citizens receive money they do not need. Some people might reduce their working hours, shrinking the tax base. If UBI were funded by creating money rather than redistributing income, demand could raise prices, particularly for housing and other goods whose supply cannot expand quickly. Most importantly, replacing specialised benefits with one flat payment could disadvantage people facing high costs due to disability, illness or housing needs.

These risks depend heavily on design. The gross price of UBI is not its true net cost if higher earners repay their entitlement through the tax system. Equally, an unconditional benefit does not disappear when employment begins, so it may discourage work less than welfare programmes with abrupt income thresholds. However, this does not make an income sufficient for a comfortable life automatically affordable. Governments should introduce a restrained payment gradually, fund it through transparent taxation and preserve additional assistance for vulnerable groups. Trials should also examine employment behaviour, rents and regional price changes before national expansion.

In conclusion, UBI offers genuine advantages in dignity, adaptability and administrative simplicity, but its critics are right that an excessively generous or poorly funded version could be harmful. I support a carefully limited basic income as one component of a broader welfare and employment strategy, not as a universal solution to automation.

BAND 8

Part 2 · Band 8 Sample Answer

As automation changes the labour market, universal basic income is increasingly proposed as a way to protect citizens from unstable employment. Supporters believe it would guarantee dignity and create new opportunities, while opponents fear high costs, weaker incentives to work and rising prices. I believe a limited UBI could be beneficial, provided it supplements rather than replaces services for people with particular needs.

There are several persuasive arguments in its favour. An unconditional payment would ensure that everyone could afford at least some basic expenses during unemployment, retraining or a period of insecure work. This security could encourage entrepreneurship because people would be better able to take a risk without facing complete financial ruin. Others might use the freedom to study, care for children or support elderly relatives. UBI could also simplify parts of the welfare system. Since every citizen would qualify, governments would spend less time checking income, family circumstances and willingness to seek employment. Recipients would also avoid the embarrassment that sometimes prevents eligible people from applying for assistance.

However, the objections are substantial. Paying every citizen enough to live on would be extremely expensive and could require higher taxes or reduced spending on healthcare, education and housing. Giving the same sum to wealthy and poor people may also seem like a poor use of public money. Furthermore, some recipients could choose to work less, making it harder to fund the programme. Inflation is another concern. If millions of households suddenly had more cash but the supply of homes, energy or food remained limited, prices could increase and reduce the value of the payment.

A further danger is that governments might use UBI as a reason to remove targeted welfare. People with disabilities, for example, often have additional costs that cannot be met by a standard payment. For this reason, I would support only a modest basic income funded mainly through progressive taxation. Higher earners would effectively return much of their payment through taxes, while low-income households would keep the full benefit. Existing disability support and essential public services should remain available. Introducing the policy in stages would also allow governments to monitor changes in employment and prices.

In conclusion, UBI can provide security, encourage useful risk-taking and make welfare simpler, but an overly generous scheme could become unaffordable and harm vulnerable citizens if it replaced targeted assistance. A limited payment combined with progressive taxes and specialised benefits offers the most balanced approach.

BAND 7

Part 2 · Band 7 Sample Answer

Universal basic income would give every citizen a regular payment regardless of employment or income. Some see it as a response to automation and insecurity, while others believe it would create economic and social problems. In my opinion, a moderate basic income could help, but it should not replace existing welfare programmes.

Supporters argue that UBI would provide security and dignity. Workers who lose jobs because of automation would still have money for basic expenses while seeking employment or gaining new skills. As the payment would continue after they found work, they would not immediately lose their support. This could make it easier to accept part-time employment or start a business. People might also spend more time providing valuable unpaid care for relatives.

Another advantage is simplicity. Welfare systems can require many forms, interviews and eligibility checks. A universal payment would need fewer rules and could reach people who fail to claim support because the process is confusing. It may also reduce the shame associated with seeking assistance.

On the other hand, UBI could be extremely costly if it covered all living expenses. Governments might need to raise taxes or reduce funding for schools and hospitals. Critics also worry that some people would choose not to work, reducing productivity and tax revenue. In addition, extra spending might raise prices when there are not enough homes or essential goods available.

There is also a risk to vulnerable groups. If disability, housing and unemployment support were replaced by one equal payment, people with greater needs could receive less help. A wealthy person does not require the same assistance as someone unable to work because of serious illness.

For these reasons, I support a limited UBI rather than a payment covering every cost. It should be financed through a fair tax system, so richer citizens return much of it in tax. Disability and housing benefits should continue. Governments could first test the policy in selected areas and examine its effects on work and prices.

In conclusion, UBI could provide a useful safety net and make welfare easier to access. Nevertheless, it must remain affordable and protect those with additional needs. A moderate payment alongside targeted benefits would be preferable to either rejecting UBI or allowing it to replace the entire welfare system.

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