ACADEMIC WRITING SAMPLE ANSWERS

Academic Writing Sample Answers Practice 7 Test 04

This original practice page includes Task 1 (Dynamic Mixed Chart) and Task 2 (Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion), with Band 9, Band 8, and Band 7 sample answers for IELTS preparation.
Academic Writing Task 1

Task 1 · Dynamic Mixed Chart

Task 1 Prompt

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show a country’s electricity generation mix and the proportions of new generating capacity added from different energy sources in 2022, together with annual investment in three groups of energy sources from 2018 to 2022.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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BAND 9

Part 1 · Band 9 Sample Answer

The three charts depict a country’s energy transition through its electricity generation mix and new capacity additions in 2022, alongside investment trends for three energy groupings between 2018 and 2022.

Overall, the existing power system remained heavily reliant on fossil fuels, particularly coal and natural gas. However, renewables overwhelmingly dominated newly installed capacity, consistent with a sharp rise in investment in solar and wind. Meanwhile, spending on coal and nuclear power declined steadily.

Coal was the largest source of electricity generation in 2022, accounting for 38.4%, while natural gas supplied a further 29.1%. Together, therefore, fossil fuels produced over two thirds of national electricity. Nuclear energy represented 10.5%. The three renewable sources collectively contributed 22%, comprising 9.2% from hydropower, 8.7% from wind and only 4.1% from solar.

The pattern for capacity additions was markedly different. Solar alone constituted 50% of all gigawatts added, and wind made up another 33%. Natural gas accounted for approximately 13%, while other sources contributed 4%; no new coal capacity was recorded. Thus, solar had the smallest share of existing generation but the largest share of expansion.

Investment figures reinforce this shift. Funding for solar and wind rose from about $45 billion in 2018 to $60 billion in 2020, before accelerating to roughly $88 billion in 2022. By contrast, coal and nuclear investment fell from $25 billion to $18 billion and then $12 billion. Spending on natural gas and the grid dipped from approximately $32 billion to $27 billion before recovering to $34 billion, still far below renewable investment by 2022.

BAND 8

Part 1 · Band 8 Sample Answer

The charts provide information about a nation’s electricity sector, including the generation mix and proportions of new capacity added in 2022. They also show investment in renewables, natural gas and the grid, and coal and nuclear energy from 2018 to 2022.

Overall, coal and natural gas supplied most of the country’s electricity in 2022, but solar and wind were responsible for the great majority of new generating capacity. Investment also moved strongly towards renewables over the four-year period, while spending on coal and nuclear power decreased.

In the generation mix, coal ranked first at 38.4%, followed by natural gas at 29.1%. Nuclear power provided 10.5%. Renewable sources had smaller individual shares: hydropower represented 9.2%, wind 8.7% and solar 4.1%. Combined, these three renewables generated 22% of electricity, compared with 67.5% from coal and gas.

Solar nevertheless accounted for exactly half of all new capacity in 2022, despite being the smallest existing generation source. Wind contributed another 33%, meaning that the two together made up 83% of additions. Natural gas represented about 13%, other sources 4%, and coal had no share.

Renewable investment increased from approximately $45 billion in 2018 to $60 billion in 2020 and around $88 billion in 2022. In comparison, investment in coal and nuclear fell continuously, from $25 billion to $18 billion and finally $12 billion. Spending on natural gas and the grid followed a less consistent pattern, declining from about $32 billion to $27 billion before rising to roughly $34 billion in 2022.

BAND 7

Part 1 · Band 7 Sample Answer

The charts show the sources used to generate electricity in a country, the percentage of new capacity added in 2022 and changes in energy investment between 2018 and 2022.

Overall, coal and natural gas were still the main sources of electricity generation. However, most new capacity came from solar and wind power. Investment in these two renewable sources increased considerably, whereas the amount invested in coal and nuclear energy declined.

Coal produced 38.4% of the nation’s electricity in 2022, making it the largest source. Natural gas was second at 29.1%, so the two fossil fuels together accounted for 67.5%. Nuclear power supplied 10.5%. Among renewables, hydropower had the highest share at 9.2%, followed by wind at 8.7% and solar at only 4.1%.

The figures for newly added capacity were very different. Solar was responsible for 50% of the total, while wind provided a further 33%. Natural gas made up approximately 13%, and other sources represented the remaining 4%. There were no new additions from coal.

Investment in solar and wind rose from about $45 billion in 2018 to $60 billion in 2020. It then reached approximately $88 billion in 2022. By contrast, spending on coal and nuclear fell from $25 billion to $18 billion and finally $12 billion. Investment in natural gas and the grid decreased from around $32 billion in 2018 to $27 billion in 2020, before recovering slightly to about $34 billion in 2022.

Academic Writing Task 2

Task 2 · Discuss Both Views and Give Your Opinion

Task 2 Prompt

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.

Write about the following topic:

Future technology may make it possible to create conscious digital copies of human beings. Some people believe that such digital beings should receive the same legal rights and social recognition as biological humans. Others argue that human rights should apply only to biological people and that digital copies should be treated differently.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

BAND 9

Part 2 · Band 9 Sample Answer

The possibility of creating conscious digital replicas would force societies to reconsider what qualifies an entity for legal personhood. Some argue that any being capable of awareness deserves the same status as a biological human, while others would reserve human rights for members of the human species. In my view, conscious digital beings should receive equal protection for their fundamental interests, although certain civic and economic rights would require rules adapted to their distinctive nature.

The strongest case for equality is that moral status should depend on consciousness rather than physical material. If a digital copy could genuinely feel pain, form relationships, remember its past and fear permanent deletion, treating it as property would permit a new form of exploitation. A company might compel copies to work continuously, alter their memories or run distressing experiments on them merely because they existed on servers rather than in bodies. The same underlying reason that prohibits cruelty towards biological people would apply: the victim has experiences and interests that can be harmed. Social recognition would also be essential because formal rights mean little if digital persons are routinely dismissed as disposable software.

However, those favouring a separate status raise legitimate practical problems. Consciousness is difficult to verify even in an advanced program, which might imitate emotional language without experiencing anything. Furthermore, digital beings could potentially be duplicated rapidly, paused, restored from backups or modified. Granting every copy an unrestricted vote could allow one individual to create millions of politically identical voters, while inheritance, marriage and criminal responsibility would become complicated if several versions shared the same memories up to a particular moment. Their dependence on privately owned hardware would also create disputes over who must pay for the resources needed to keep them active.

These differences justify tailored regulation, but not the denial of personhood. A digital being that meets a rigorous, independently reviewed standard of consciousness should receive core protections against enslavement, suffering, arbitrary alteration and deletion, together with access to legal representation and due process. Separate legislation could then define when a copy becomes an independent identity and regulate voting, duplication, ownership and access to computing resources. During genuine uncertainty, a precautionary presumption against causing severe harm would be wiser than assuming that apparent consciousness is worthless.

In conclusion, biology is an arbitrary boundary for basic moral protection if digital consciousness becomes real. Such beings should enjoy the same fundamental respect as humans, while their unusual capacities should be addressed through carefully designed, and sometimes different, legal rules.

BAND 8

Part 2 · Band 8 Sample Answer

If technology eventually produces conscious digital copies of people, governments will have to decide whether these entities are persons or sophisticated forms of property. Supporters of equal rights focus on their capacity for experience, whereas opponents emphasise their non-biological form and the legal difficulties created by copying software. I believe digital beings should have the same basic protections as humans if their consciousness can be established, but not every right could operate in exactly the same way.

A conscious entity may suffer regardless of whether its mind depends on a brain or a computer. If a digital copy retained memories, developed preferences and experienced fear, it would have interests that other people could damage. Denying it rights could allow an owner to force it to work, change its personality or delete it without review. This would be especially troubling if the copy clearly understood what was happening. Granting legal recognition would protect such beings from abuse and encourage biological humans to interact with them responsibly.

On the other hand, digital existence would create problems that current human-rights law was not designed to solve. A person normally has one body and cannot be reproduced instantly, but numerous digital copies might be created from the same original. If each received an immediate vote, a wealthy individual or organisation might gain unfair political influence by producing copies. Questions would also arise about which version owned previously acquired property, whether deleting a backup constituted death and who was responsible when several versions had the same earlier memories. In addition, it may be extremely difficult to distinguish real consciousness from a convincing programmed performance.

In my opinion, these challenges require a new legal category within personhood rather than exclusion from it. Once independent experts have found strong evidence of consciousness, a digital being should have rights to safety, freedom from forced labour, privacy, legal representation and protection against arbitrary deletion. Governments could then create specific rules for registration, duplication, voting and property to prevent abuse. Decisions about uncertain systems should be reviewable instead of being left entirely to the companies that created them.

In conclusion, conscious digital copies would differ practically from biological humans, but this difference would not justify treating them as objects. Equal fundamental protection combined with specialised legal rules would be the fairest approach.

BAND 7

Part 2 · Band 7 Sample Answer

Future computers may be able to create digital copies of humans that are genuinely conscious. Some people think these beings should receive the same rights and acceptance as biological people, while others believe human rights should remain limited to humans with physical bodies. In my opinion, conscious digital beings should receive basic legal rights, although some laws would need to treat them differently because they could be copied or altered.

The main argument for equal treatment is that consciousness allows a being to experience harm. A digital person might remember its previous life, form new relationships and feel afraid of being deleted. If this were true, it would be wrong for a company to own the copy as ordinary software, force it to work constantly or change its memories without permission. The fact that its mind operated on a computer would not make its suffering unimportant. Legal and social recognition would therefore protect it from serious abuse.

However, applying every existing human right to digital copies could cause practical difficulties. It may be hard to prove whether a program is truly conscious or is simply producing realistic answers. Copies might also be created in very large numbers. Giving each one a separate vote could damage the fairness of elections, especially if one organisation controlled them. Property and identity would become confusing as well. Several copies could share the same memories and all claim to be the original owner of the same possessions.

For these reasons, I support equal basic protection but not completely identical legal treatment. A digital being shown to be conscious should be protected from forced labour, harmful experiments and deletion without a fair legal process. It should also be able to obtain legal help and control its personal information. At the same time, governments would need special rules about creating new copies, registering separate identities, voting and dividing property. Experts independent of technology companies should help decide whether a system meets the required standard.

In conclusion, rights should be based mainly on the ability to experience life and harm, not only on biology. Conscious digital beings should therefore be recognised as persons, while carefully designed laws address the special problems created by their digital form.

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